bondarant

it would be cool if you added one of your readers to this story as a cameo

its genuinely nice to see you back after the loner one i don't know if you remember me but i can see you improved a lot cheers brother

the beast is consuming his wretched meal...

"forgive them father for they not know what they do"

Jesus Christ loves you despite all the hatred that anyone has for him he has died for them and even in his last moments he said "Father forgive them for they not know what they do" remember his sacrifice

this guy has used chat gpt to correct his works or wrote entire lines from the prompts its not a bad idea and the execution seems good enough but at some point reading the exact same ai written lines over and over again makes it unbearable

it's a decent read i think the personality is really well written but the plot comes off as really forced and it is. i don't really get the whole forced relationships either and then when emma was freed she just went back to her usual plot? i'd expect some development like she actually falls in love with him or something and then he reveals the whole system because instincts lol i don't really know what to say other than this fanfic won't go far good luck man

at some point i really hope his charisma becomes higher

honestly i never would have expected such a work coming from webnovel but its interesting thought provoking attention grabing its great i hope you can finish this book (maybe you can add me as a cameo?)

i genuinely don't understand this is the dumbest plot i have come across