Sami_Alfoheday

he can fight them, but he will die if the fight prolonged

says the village without s rank

Kakashi isn't weak but isn't strong ether

I didn't want to discourage you it was a good chapter but a meh to me because the suicide

a meh chapter, if I'm honest, the Mc killing himself shows how weak minded he is since he isn't in a bad situation. There are people suffering from disease and hunger, enslavement, and physical and sexual abuse, but suicide is never the answer you want to change your situation, not stop living

not bad, except it is typical reincarnation with wishes

we need blood, dead people, sadness, unfairness

there is nothing new here the same start as a lot of other fanfics you said read the first chapter if this gonna be the your standard writing I don't think this will be a good fanfic

weak minded