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Like FR. Even though it's good but it feels bland to read every single repeating dialogues...
Was this Fic more focus to football I guess?
Bruh FR.. I don't know how I dropped the p*rnhwa but his reactions seems weird and unbearable at the same time. .
What about My landlady Noona? Well...
Can you minimize this author ?. Was it necessary to use this exclamation marks every time they Explain something?.. Can they be more calm and collected?....
Kazuma is proud:
Well I hope it's not overuse cause I'm not used to read mtl novels... It always makes me think every time why would there an Exclamation mark every time they talk or in every grammar? Are they retard?. good chapter BTW
"!" author do you think she's talking softly if you use this mark?.. Hmmm
Soo. .. Based on the synopsis, is this a plot wheres MC thinks whit his d*ck first, second and third before UISNG his brain??.. Was MC stealing others wives (even though they're already happy but still wants to steal them just like a trophy of just to satisfy his d*ck? ).. Was this another Pokémon harem?.. Wish fulfilments?. .If it is , well not my cup of tea. So tired and boring to read with this kind of not executed well stories(specially harem novels if it's not written well) nowadays...
See.. This kind of MC mindset sucks.. Sti haven't move on..
No morning BJ?
Dang author you did it again with this fic. Can you translate better.. I Mean. . Why would you mention his name or complete name every sing time there's a paragraph or narrating????.. Like bruh aren't you not irritated?.. It's getting to the point we're its hord for a reader to continue to read this.. Specially how this becoming more chaotic that the Other fic.. I think the other Hentai fic is much better than this... Like bruh... I've read soo many fic but this is a bit worse.. Can't continue reading this.. Too much Grammar mistakes from the first chapter.. I think the only better translated one is the Synopsis.. But this chapters?.. Bruh author haven't you use a grammarly or qullbot to make the grammar better??..... It's free BTW...