It was fine up until he turned into the usual phycopath oc mc’s that I find on this site in the dc arc. Honestly at least show some guilt, even if it was self defense,such a change is hard to go through without development, not magically deciding to be a killer for the greator good.

Also he was an anime fan so that stays with him.

I fixed it thanks.

Thanks for the review

Thank you.

What is most popular in Norse, Make the comparison.

This is going to be a start, I plan to make it develop into the Asgard we all know and love today, so have a bit of patience, I will explain everything.

The only problem is that the story seems kind of bland… like maybe it’s just how the story is written.

I’l explain more about this world in the next chapter

What if Krillin was like Saitama

I feel like this is extending longer than necessary

Part 4 is up archangel Kakarot https://youtu.be/15PwReBcvG0

Part 2 https://youtu.be/f44buUKYdW0

It's going to be continued.

Yeah, I know the Name sucks, it'll change soon.

Dope, thanks for the chapter

I think it was my old story that I deleted, I might repost it as a new story after I finish this one.