Efe_Kaymak

This story is like an annoying ad… dropped

I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it

Extremely slow updates, no wonder your fic lost peoples interest

This Echo thing kills the originality

I really like the way you're going with this story, i have only one minor problem with your work that is the story is really slow paced for my taste. I may be the problem here because of my lack of patiance anyway timeskip would be nice

My good sir when will you update?

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This doesn’t make any sense, this chapter is clearly written in chat gpt. It is such a shame that this story has ruined…

Pretty good i hope you’ll update soon!!!