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It would have been a good story is enzo was an human but he's more like a selfish devil who just fuck anyone while suppressing them with his power and then calling them slut and bitch for getting fucked by him. He too more abusive and even had sex with a underage girl calling her slut and bitch becoz her mother has sex with him and then almost broken her. He's too cruel and even killed the father infront of their own eyes and made him aware before his death that he'll be having sex with his wife and two daughters. Everything here is just related to a dumb sex offender abusing all characters in a good story. Basically he doesn't even meets a single standard of being a Mc in a story. Most importantly he behaves like a beta Mc who have been given too much power and has gone mad.
More importantly why was uryuu was able to run?? Is author trying to make a story with turning everything against Mc and then making him look like a hero as he shouts some dumb cringe lines and overpower others....!!
Sometimes you have to leave dumb people who are too kind and ignorant for their own good. He's parents are just making things difficult for him and even if they want to stay here he himself could leave and train in some other city no?? Why is he crying and cursing everything when you haven't even made a single plan for future.
Idk why people are thanking in the comment section but it is really badly written or translated. Maybe it's that free translation software which just messed up names of both characters and also their genders making whole chapter a bit dumb.
Well as its's an erotic story people would want to go for the erotic stuff first to get to know about MC character much more easily. so i was just expressing my thoughts, please don't take it to your heart.
I don't see anything much erotic in the story till yet.... It's just a story of a prince boy in a opposite world of women, as he almost got raped and then got a system which will let him talk with other versions of him. It's rather time taking as it's would have been better if he another was reincarnated soul from earth.
What the hell did I just read....transmigrated NTR mc just forgiving girls for cucking him because they love him....lol haha....this is soo dumb. He should have remained away from them and start taking out guys on the after getting some information. But he was just wasting his time while even his childhood friend got fucked by those guys.... he's literally in a hentai world. You have to be alert every minute of have some special skills.
Author was not able to showcase the deal and negotiations.... Even if this is a translation it should have been refined to a certain level after going through so many people.
Writing a small paragraph in complex and elongated version, that's what this is!! It's like I'm studing a grammar and literature novel instead of a story here.
Author has added too many stimulations and the real story can't keep up with the stimulations itself... He's literally using stimulation every day making whole novel filled with it instead of the story. Stimulator is broken as all main characters involved in the stimulations remembers all in real life....this is lead to a surge in hostility towards mc as he's literally a villain in stimulations. But author is still trying to use plot armour turning everything in his favour making story and other characters behave differently from their personality..... kind of dumb if you ask me.