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Friendly_Immortal

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just be yourself...and read novels 😂...working on my arts

2021-11-14 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortala day ago
     công bố

    It would have been a good story is enzo was an human but he's more like a selfish devil who just fuck anyone while suppressing them with his power and then calling them slut and bitch for getting fucked by him. He too more abusive and even had sex with a underage girl calling her slut and bitch becoz her mother has sex with him and then almost broken her. He's too cruel and even killed the father infront of their own eyes and made him aware before his death that he'll be having sex with his wife and two daughters. Everything here is just related to a dumb sex offender abusing all characters in a good story. Basically he doesn't even meets a single standard of being a Mc in a story. Most importantly he behaves like a beta Mc who have been given too much power and has gone mad.

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    Friendly_Immortal4 days ago
    trả lời Friendly_Immortal

    More importantly why was uryuu was able to run?? Is author trying to make a story with turning everything against Mc and then making him look like a hero as he shouts some dumb cringe lines and overpower others....!!

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal4 days ago
    bình luận

    Sometimes you have to leave dumb people who are too kind and ignorant for their own good. He's parents are just making things difficult for him and even if they want to stay here he himself could leave and train in some other city no?? Why is he crying and cursing everything when you haven't even made a single plan for future.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal4 days ago
    bình luận

    Idk why people are thanking in the comment section but it is really badly written or translated. Maybe it's that free translation software which just messed up names of both characters and also their genders making whole chapter a bit dumb.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal4 days ago
    trả lời Friendly_Immortal

    Well as its's an erotic story people would want to go for the erotic stuff first to get to know about MC character much more easily. so i was just expressing my thoughts, please don't take it to your heart.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal4 days ago
     công bố

    I don't see anything much erotic in the story till yet.... It's just a story of a prince boy in a opposite world of women, as he almost got raped and then got a system which will let him talk with other versions of him. It's rather time taking as it's would have been better if he another was reincarnated soul from earth.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal8 days ago
     công bố

    What the hell did I just read....transmigrated NTR mc just forgiving girls for cucking him because they love him....lol haha....this is soo dumb. He should have remained away from them and start taking out guys on the after getting some information. But he was just wasting his time while even his childhood friend got fucked by those guys.... he's literally in a hentai world. You have to be alert every minute of have some special skills.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal11 days ago
    bình luận

    Author was not able to showcase the deal and negotiations.... Even if this is a translation it should have been refined to a certain level after going through so many people.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal12 days ago
     công bố

    Writing a small paragraph in complex and elongated version, that's what this is!! It's like I'm studing a grammar and literature novel instead of a story here.

  • Friendly_Immortal
    Friendly_Immortal16 days ago
     công bố

    Author has added too many stimulations and the real story can't keep up with the stimulations itself... He's literally using stimulation every day making whole novel filled with it instead of the story. Stimulator is broken as all main characters involved in the stimulations remembers all in real life....this is lead to a surge in hostility towards mc as he's literally a villain in stimulations. But author is still trying to use plot armour turning everything in his favour making story and other characters behave differently from their personality..... kind of dumb if you ask me.

Evil Nobita & Different world

Reincarnated as a boy named nobita he was thrown into a world of different animes. Using his knowledge from the future he starts earning money to establish his foundation and protect his loved ones..... but will he be able to save everyone or will he be turned to a evil being. He's not gonna waste this new chance like a lazy person and will enjoy the life to the fullest. He'll unlock a Mercenary System as he travels around the multiverse through our favourite movies and animes helping people and earning rewards. He builds his harem as quickly as possible using his young face and tricking aunties eating them out, while waiting her there daughters to grow. Very very evil Mc I tell you...!! . . . webnovel Friendly_Immortal Author: Friendly Immortal Fantasy, Business, Harem, Romance Ongoing · 67K Views 15+Chs Synopsis [Authors note: I hope you all like this.] *** I want you all to keep on supporting me and help me improve myself. Bonus chapters on, 150 Power Stones: 1 chapter 300 Power Stones: 2 chapters 450 Power Stones: 3 chapters As for golden tickets 1 golden tickets: 1 bonus chapter 5 golden tickets: 2 bonus chapters 10 golden tickets: 3 bonus chapters The same goes for gifts A Dragon: 1 bonus chapters A Magic Castle: 3 bonus chapters A spacecraft: 4 bonus chapters A Golden Gachapon: 5 bonus chapters Thanks for reading everyone, hope you will enjoy this. And, do check out my other novel, I have put it on hold for now, but will soon continue it again. __________ Milfs, Oyakodon, netori, family culture, mature women, virgins, harem, beautiful female leads, yandere, incest, anal, pussy, bdsm, mind break, training, mother-son, harem, milf, , aunt, college girl, school girl, bad boy, business, romance, beating villain being a bigger villain than them.

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