Zeton

why tho, you don't like the story?

This thing has a lot of potential brother! I can definitely see that this novel is gonna be a super hit. Keep working and keep grinding. The start of the story is amzing too, can’t wait to see what will happen next. I am expecting there are gonna be planetary wars etc. May Allah help you in your work.

Alright bro I will do it. Thanks for the review

Alright got it! Thanks for the review

Alright I will get real. The world building is topnotch ( don’t know if I spelled it right) The character design is also okay, it’s pretty norma. The writing what matters the most, the writing and the narration is really smooth, easy to understand. You relax and read this novel without wasting a lot of brain cells. The story is also really good.

This is my first time reading a dungeon novel,and I will have to say I don’t regret it. It has an amazing start of the story. Though I will have to say plot of the story is pretty basic. Anyways keep it up, you wil definitely achieve something in life

Uhhh! I don’t where to begin with! The writing is way to smooth! To be honest I don’t have words to describe this. They way the story starts slow explaining the situation in the most smooth way possible. Honestly my writing is nothing campared to your 🥴🥴 This a masterpiece keep up the good work. The character design is also good. My fav character so far is the sister. Don’t her name. I don’t remember names. Anyways good novel keep it up

Thank you brother. I am glad you liked it

Thank you for the chapter

Oh? She has also has a suger daddy?