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Story at the beginning was good but has you cross over 200+ Chapters the writing seem to be repetitive, the yuri seems like a spice to the story but isn't bland After crossing 500+ Chapter noticed the writer's plot twist seem to lack something It felt like it was rushed (not sure) Anyways good story hope you continue

The books seems good just ended up as another book in indefinite hiatus

Read the story based on the synopsis and tag Writing quality was good and consistent Character designs was ok with nothing special, thinking about the future tag i was expecting something more but let down Background was lacking (is the setting a futuristic one or just a present one) And most especially where is the yuri???! Also the story just feels like teens having straight sex in a present underdog world

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The storyline feels new as the world setting is nice, charter design are a bit lacking, the quality is superb, though please inprove on the updates