Masked_Narcissist

Gracias por los cumplidos mi amigo.

gracias por el comentario I guess that's thanks for your comment?, not to good at spanish so...

Loved the novel, I can see quite a lot of details and can say this is experienced writing. It's a great one but I would suggest that you change the cover as it's sort of offsetting. Even if you use an image online and credit in you synopsis, I can guarantee the novel itself will gain more popularity. Synopsis is good, plot is well developed, I can see potential. Prompts to the author.

Talent man. Talent and luck....

Lily potter, may add some other universe tragic characters. I got some world travel ideas but not really keen on which waifus to pick right now. I don't want a Pokémon farm, at the maximum 4 or maybe 5.

I was a little confused, but I'll check on that

Good story. Ngl, I saw similar one's but they usually end very fast so I hope yours's isn't like that. It has potential, I do want to point out that the pace is usually steady and good, but sometimes the pace rushes a little to slowly for my tastes, but that's just my preference though. Good job man. You might want to change a few words to make it more dynamic, and fix a few errors, but well done, hope to see more from this novel.

Your mother's sandals...