Cover editing done by me if u like just say in comments

Hey proofreader here just giving this novel a rating, it's a good novel if u like food and the omegaverse come on and read

search for emiya alternative backstory

woah seesh hold your horses girl you did just born

this one

HOOGGG RIIIIDDDDDEEEERRRRR

Get the Astral Duct Tape

thanks and sukuna zoro

his intelligence should be B+ not SS he is not that super smart

alternative title:- Raven calls me "Daddy"

D~O~N~U~T~H~O~L~E

raven went -

just relax and hear some songs to cool your mind

put some female villains in the harem idk the names but having gutsy women would really change the dynamic

you are doing great but in my honest opinion you should try to flesh out the characters more, like you can improve yuji's naitivity Or one say his innocence make him little mature so he won't be fooled by the villains like in og canon and can you reduce the knuckle headed of your oc so he won't become overconfident he is right now a generic protag if the webnovel novel's at least he should remain calm sometime like bang

thanks for the chapter keep up the good work author