Ren_like_coolaid

Poor lass.

The grammar is incredible, The pacing is neither too slow nor quick, and the mc is emotionally intelligent (props to the author for making an mc with human emotion instead of a 5000-year-old-emotionless-edge-lord that think human emotions are bad), being able to understand other characters (and himself), whilst also not being an airhead. Maybe I am being to quick review this fanfic whilst it still has 24 chapters, but I hope this series continues, there is a lot of potential here and I hope to see this fanfic grows bigger than what I currently imagine.

A good fanfict story, a unique mc with swaping personalities that gives the story more spice to it, the only complaimt i have is the update speed, at one point i thought the author abandon the story, look what i am trying to say is that the author should update us with a chapter, once a month maybe twice months i would be fine with that speed, the author geets alot of time to do his personal stuff and we get a chapter to entertain ourselves.