Malex_999

who is itcharo

yes book is becoming terrible iIyhink author let someone else write last 10 chapters or so because they really suck and don't flow with rest of the storyline

story is starting to suck did you let someone else write the last few chapters bc doesn't seem the same as all chapters before author this is absolutely ridiculous the sss skill he is paying people to take them then picks a sucky second class with water element his worst element and then he started acting dumb why is it so terrible now the story is going to shit fast I'm already regretting buying chapters in advance thinking of dropping the book this is becoming stupid read at this point

why pick the water class that's so stupid he has a god to kill the 4th demon god author real let down here this chapter is crap you picked his hands down worst element for what and it's seems to be a copy of some other stories I'm reading which makes it worse bad move really dumb option selected in my opinion

it's getting boring with all stats and not needed information it's really killing the story and flow idk if this stays the same same I'm gonna gonna drop the book it's becoming repetitive and not much else it went from one of the most interesting books to the most boring in less than 40 chapters and isn't improving

why is top 5 golden tickets bonus inactive? the book is in number 5 slot so seems like you being lazy to me

why do I have to unlock the chapters twice

You waste a lot on explanations idk why but seems excessive

Please don’t have broken be a whimp

Hate the Leon chapters make those shorter and make the broken chapters longer since your going to keep doing both which is annoying it’s what people hate about assassins creed the out of game parts no one cares about or likes but you do you author please let readers know which chapters are which bc I don’t want to read about Leon the book is called broken not Leon