DaoistpIT00f

going directly for a Journey of strength though...

i only read two chapters but author seems to have problems with punctuation and pacing. and i love multiverse system stories. though what i love most about system stories is progress which glossed in this fic. done with the review.🙃

big bro system

i will make it Fast. story doesnt flow well and character interactions seems odd to me for some reason. yep. thats all.😐😐 ugh review word limit.

or i guess under

i didnt understand before the translation above.

what does it mean? does item quality depends on level difference?

isnt her legs disabled

bs alert!

how is this weak to strong? its chapter 1 and he is mizukage.