I like the story I caught a bit of the first version didn’t know this was a revised version of it I definitely like how this version is going more give it a read

Like the concept not what i'm usally into tho

What in the F!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If Duke is dead i swear to all that is holy!!!!!!

Agreed I feel more connected to the characters this chapter

Travis black thats awesome i love the diverse characters

Well charactization however I want to keep reading and that's whats hard about a brand new series but I like ill definitely see what this about.

great so far.