Hollowmonk

So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.

Your fanfics are by far the best of all the webnovels, and I look for them every day. So I encourage you not to stop, and keep posting more, enjoy the hipy

I suspect that Mary Jane never discovered Spider-Man's identity by literally living with him. What you said was nonsense

The story is good, but it was forced

The story is good and to some extent addictive, but the problem is that the character doesn't have his own story line, he only trains to be able to help the main plot, and he forgets to do it. The things themselves. I recommend reading Ass:. hollowmonk

I really like template fanfics, but not everything is rosy.The story is good, up to a point. The story is so fast that it seems like it is written without any interest. Ass:. Hollowmonk

The story is very good, and very dynamic. There are some things that leave something to be desired, but it's a matter of preference from reader to reader. I recommend! Ass:. Hollowmonk

Good up to a point. If it were to be so connected to the plot I would watch the original. Undeveloped character, with a wide range of development, many things unexplored. Ass:. Hollowmonk

And that. A constructive criticism, for me, as I love fanfics, it is essential that the character has his own story, not so dependent on the original plot. Ass:. Hollowmonk

I went to chapter 30, expecting more. I really liked the dynamics and the shape of the character, his free form and having his own story, so far I don't have much to complain about. I just hope that it continues to follow this same premise, remains free and without being tied to the original plot, the avatar and its trio. Ass:. Hollowmonk