ScepticalFrog

Your comprehension of the Dao of MTL must reach at least the 3rd level to understand the texts. Additionally, your cultivation must reach the Peak of The 9nth stage of the Nascent Realm for your body and brain to adapt or you will face a backlash, it may cripple your cultivation.

nice

i have been reading it for the second time until last uploaded chap. there are things that confuses me. but still this ff has a lot of potential. please continue it, dont mind the negative comments. there is a reason this novel is a FANFICTION it means anything is possible.

the original protag is out. the one inside the pearl is a different person. the way the story was written is like a summary very fast paced. but where is the vermilion bird tho. i like it tho. I'd like to elaborate more for the author but this is a completed ff already soooo. this review is for the readers.

grunt: young master use rock smash

grunt: young master use rock smash

woah. that's the whole plot. right there. well. we all saw that coming. what do you expect from an OP character? the author did this to make us curious and read how would the bad guys die. it's a given that they would die tho. this is not the first novel/ff we've read with the tag op mc.

it's por****

Yeaahhhhhhh. cringe 😬

Wow. Just. Wow. Even i believe that there is a limit. But who am i to judge. i commend the author for the effort. I like read stories with such tags. but. this story is TOO MUCH. The world is not ready for this. This story is not for me. Good luck to you author-san.