Laycans

ff's premise is interesting, but I don't think I managed to captivate readers as the author expressed the narrative of the story. ----------------------

the story is too confusing for me, i can't connect to it, just advice that most people who read ff keep reading a story when i can understand which course the world in question is following mainly yours and it's hard to follow since '2 protagonist' I don't have anything against it, it just seemed like I don't have a chronology, each chapter seems incongruous with each other

This is a description of how I felt reading the end of the chapter.

I was thinking about it

what nonsense is this?

why attack the chest you know it's in the head that kills

bs

he is as strong as a low class satan?

Sigh

why does he do it for himself? 4 years and nothing