XtrmeMisfit

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oh yes

I’ll be completely honest—I'm up to chapter 35, and this web novel is nothing short of amazing. The way the author crafts the narrative, especially in how Arthur directs the movie, is truly impressive. The different perspectives add depth to the story, making it even more engaging. The writing style and pacing have kept me hooked, and I have to say, author, keep up the great work! You’ve got me eagerly awaiting more of this web novel and anything else you create. If you have a Patreon with extra chapters, I’d be more than happy to support and subscribe. And just to clarify, I’m not a bot—just a guy giving an honest review of something I genuinely enjoy. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!

"Dear author, could you consider relocating the A/N to the end of the chapter and perhaps adding a symbol to signify which paragraph it corresponds to? While I adore the story, these side notes tend to disrupt the flow for me. Nonetheless, I'm committed to continuing reading. Yours is one of the few fanfics I've come across that truly captivates me. Keep up the excellent work!"

"Dear author, could you consider relocating the A/N to the end of the chapter and perhaps adding a symbol to signify which paragraph it corresponds to? While I adore the story, these side notes tend to disrupt the flow for me. Nonetheless, I'm committed to continuing reading. Yours is one of the few fanfics I've come across that truly captivates me. Keep up the excellent work!"

hey author do you got a Patreon with extra chapters?

love it can't wait for more chapters. I'll donate what little powers stones I got.

It is a disease that causes scarring (fibrosis) of the lungs. The word "idiopathic" means it has no known cause. Scarring causes stiffness in the lungs and makes it difficult to breathe. Lung damage from IPF is irreversible and progressive, meaning it gets worse over time.

You my good sir have earned those 3 power stones I have. Looking forward to your next chapter.

I feel like using the term stabbed or punctured or even poked would be better. Just my opinion.