suikofan

Holy shit it’s unreadable. Tried to get through the first two chapters but couldn’t. The translation is absolute garbage.

Kinda makes sense. They have been around since the 60s and weren’t closely guarded. Once Tony revolutionized it there would be others trying the same. Or someone broke into one of Tony’s houses and grabbed a few.

616 Pietro can fly by swinging his arms in circles and flapping his legs like a dolphin. It would propel him through the air like a missile. He stopped doing it cause it made him look stupid.

More hits? Should change that.

The toxic part and the part that enhances you are separate, if you science it.

Wait didn’t they skim off the top from a wide variety of dimensions? Why is he locked into one?

Quicksilver is always going fast he’s stuck at super speed. He needs to focus to interact with others. When he loses focus he blurs, talks too fast and even creates wind shears and sonic booms.

Grammar and story structure are well done. But it barely counts as a story itself. Things happen, characters appear or disappear, no struggle for anything, and no one truly interacts with each other.

Katana

Did you mean dome?