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I remember that Ether could manipulate the darkness element in his soul space, despite it being little. Would the MC in this case be an anomaly in controlling another existential pillar? I had sent this question on Patreon because of chapter 445.
Well, I believe that with almost 30 chapters (currently while I'm writing) it has good material for constructive criticism. Personally, I loved the construction so far. The world as a backdrop is one that I really like, with various races, clans and energy systems to work with, giving the writer the possibility to be quite free in the plot, of course without betraying the original premise. The MC so far is a bit childish (I believe because he died a virgin, I don't know haha), but he understands things quickly and isn't stupid, which I would particularly hate. In this sense, the work has everything to take off if the Author has patience and resilience, not giving up on the work halfway through, which unfortunately happens a lot here. Finally, I hope that the Author does not get stuck with already saturated clichés such as harem, infinite female protagonists, etc., etc. Only God knows how much of this is saturated. A more different approach would certainly win over readers. Thanks for the hard work, Author-san.
First I want to thank the Author for his hard work. Furthermore, what I really liked and continue to like is the psychological maturation of the MC throughout the plot. Also, the fact that he sets up a small militia also pleases me (Esuriente and our adorable wolf). In this sense, I hope that Kai continues to increase his militia in this sense, mainly due to the fact that at the end of the work or during the course of it, Kai ends up having the idea of ascending as a God or something like that. Another positive point is the fact that the Author does not rely on and force clichés, such as a harem, a female protagonist out of nowhere, etc. For now, I only have good things to say about the work, with concrete and substantial progress.
So far as I've read it (chapter 34), I think it's a good work overall. The pace is a little slow, but the Author is always attentive to details, something I really like and which makes up for the slow pace. Furthermore, if used well, the work has a vast universe with infinite possibilities to be incorporated into the work, depending only on the Author's creativity. In short, so far a good work, with a lot of room to improve and become a masterpiece, if the Author doesn't give up.