Apoqliphoth

Hello. I did actually. My Discord ID is Naphulae#1335

Alright, I'm a sucker for brooding, dark characters, but I must say, even without that, the story is quite engaging. As of yet (chapter 22), we still haven't gotten a concrete view of the world, though glimpses of it are subtly littered throughout the chapters, which I like. My main problem is the writing consistency; while the author has a wide vocabulary, some annoyingly repetitive passages disrupt the flow. However, it's nothing further editing wouldn't fix, and the quality itself is excellent. It might be a spoiler, but Marvos is the best boi, and I challenge everyone who doesn't think the same. Trust me. If you still haven't decided, you HAVE to give this book a read!

He better not be dead or I'll riot

So far, the story seems really interesting, with two other settings that have as much potential as the current one (I'm looking at you, Beast Planet). The writing quality could be improved, but there's no major problem. It's perfectly readable and fluid in a sense. I'd definitely recommend giving it a chance for any indecisive new reader. Try it!

Aeden and Megissa are the main characters, but the story's first half revolves heavily around the Male Lead. As for who has the most significant part, I'd say they're pretty equal. Each one will have his role and importance at some point. I hope you'll enjoy reading it! Please don't hesitate to comment your thoughts on each chapter :).

I really love how fleshed out the world is. The author is doing it at his own pace, gradually building up interesting details, places and factions for an anticipated (I hope) showdown. There are some issues with the writing flow in certain chapters, but they're easily ignored and aren't that bothersome. I haven't read many novels that combine sci-fi elements with fantasy ones (like magic), so it was definitely a surprise for me. All in all, it was an excellent read. I highly recommend it!

While not something I would typically read, I can appreciate the author's writing quality and his work's depth (up to chapter 4, where I stopped). The format itself is quite interesting as it sometimes reads like a script, much to my initial confusion while perusing my way through. All in all, I wish the author a good continuation. If you're a fan of this genre, absolutely do not hesitate to give it a go.

Traditions need to be kept, and since I have confidence in my writing, I'll give myself a shameless full score review. This is my first serious work. As such, I hope you'll follow me as I weave thread by thread the world I imagined. If you've just started reading my book, you must know that I'm incredibly fond of foreshadowing. Thus, however small or "filler" it may seem, every detail will be relevant sooner or later. Naturally, don't hesitate to drop a review! It helps me develop and improve my skills while also motivating me to publish more. With that said, please have a good read!

Though the structure, grammar and general flow of the story can get awkward at times, the author has clearly put effort into fleshing out the main character and overall world background. It's usually rare, but I found myself actually finding the characterization quite realistic and natural, while the writing quality itself picks up the deeper you get into the story. The surrounding lore also has me hooked, since I'm not that familiar with Eastern Fantasies, everything feels like a breath of fresh air. Definitely adding this one to my library!

That old man was hilarious, too bad he went away too soon. This is my first taste of Eastern Fantasy, and while it's confusing at points, the author's writing style and descriptive abilities make it more enthralling and somewhat very enjoyable. The premise is strong and the story has great potential, I'll be waiting hungrily for more updates. Definitely give it a try!