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The story is good so far but the reasoning for him getting rid of his magic in chapter 38 seems a bit impulsive, surely there are ppl in the world who are just warrior and don't use magic, there is no way they don't have a way to counter it. Also getting rid of magic just so your immune doesn't seem worth it, especially with the touch restriction. I suspect the author wants to write certain scenarios that can only happen if he doesn't have magic, I just wish it was done in a better way

Pretty good and engaging, what's the original?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Why, you don't want a woman that has been passed around that's literally a good thing, means you have self respect

Has potential, is this a translation? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Hate to break it to you bro but objectively gravity is the weakest of the fundamental forces, you need so much of it to do something the other forces could do with a fraction of the power

Haven't read it yet but I have a problem with the concept of this novel, BBTH and Martial Universe take place in the same verse, the mcs of both novel have meet each other eventually, so there is gonna be two Flame Emperors in the same verse

This is getting a bit too cringy with all the talk about how mc is different from all the other guys and how he won't treat women like object(no need to be said), he is currently a child reel it in a bit

Mystic eyes of death perception?

I just realised when archer shows up for the grail war won't he be super op if shirou really manages to create the sword

Very good, but I'm confused as to whether this is in the Legendary Mechanic verse, or just a similar setting. Would be cool to see him project a technological weapon