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The writing quality is so childish and bad… The background story is pretty normal but the way explained is terrible. Feels like a 12 year old wrote this or something ngl.

Just let the fifth concubine die? Like she is so useless and dumb. Not worth the trouble.

If dragons r so weak they can’t fight against humans they should just die out then

Why is a dragon so weak

The title is called Phoenix aspect… what else than a Phoenix lol

Terrible writing tbh. Wasted story would of been decent at least. The mc is so weak even tho he has god like powers it’s sad and pathetic. The story is slow and boring. Nothing happens at all. Honestly a waste of time

Why do u keep using complicated words like Jovial. You can just put cheerful instead and some sentences make no sense..

Why is he acting like that while he is so strong…ik he has trauma but come on

Some words are wrong and why does it change perspective out of nowhere. It’s really confusing when it happens.

The wording is bit confusing for some reason.