He was surprised when the machine replied that I could receive data through your mobile phone. He realized that the machine could use the Internet connection of any mobile phone not far away. He was sitting in a room on the first floor of the house. He could see the school in the distance through the open window. It's a working day but I don't see anyone outside. No sound is heard because it is far away.

There many mistakes in the novel. I found a lot of wrong preposition uses. It needs a deep correction. There is no any spelling mistakes, although names of some characters and places are so strange.

Title image is great. I appreciate the artist who designed it. It shows a deep mystery background that means the story goes to a mystery world. I like such stories great. Although there is no daily update, new chapters add great developments to the story. Every chapter has a climax that is so interesting.

There are some mistakes and wrong ways for every character. All characters are live in a real world and dreams in a fantasy world. Strange creatures make some mystery and hidden programmes. Continue your work. Wish you all the best.

A great fantasy.