oh cool then, it's just that the creatures he can transform into are so lame that I had to question you about it. Although don't take this the wrong way as me wanting an op mc from the start no , I love the progress but of course if the progress is interesting enough to wait for his time shine but I don't really feel that from this.

unless the devil fruit is creative then I'd suggest just sticking with haki. plus you can just focus on having the mc create his own techniques since most technique users have skills that are borderline devil fruit abilities .

especially when the water levels are raising .

seems pretty lame to me to be honest here. I mean there isn't any magical beast that exists in fairy tail he can transform into and even more so his magic is as uncreative as can be, like seriously that's the best creative choice you got? here my guy this is how to be more interesting with your magic . chimera magic ( a magic that allows you to combine the powers and abilities of different creatures magical or not that you defeated or understood). celestial beast magic ( it allows you to tape into a dimension like the spirit realm where different celestial beasts exist and to gain their power you have to obtain their aknowledgement and respect ). beast création magic ( it allows you to imagine and create different beasts of various types through detailed description and magical power .) .....

what??? how can he be their son when his name doesn't even start with an R ?? nah dude this is already a big L my guy.

yo you know that's not how you use that saying right ?

calm down man there's no need go over the top like that! it has instead just looks unnatural .

but you wrote grandfather my guy not great grandfather.

wait a minute Makarov is laxus's grandfather so was he just saying that he was a legendary lightning Magic user.

but dragon slayers can consume other elements or different varient of their element so I don't think there is a defenative no here.

so when you mean AU, do you mean an original story that centers around the mc until canon comes and even after that ( like original missions, original events...) or just plain out just the name is fairy tail but anything else is original concept.

that really isn't an interesting reason to be a villain at all my guy. As kaiba would say ' He's a third rate villain with a fourth rate cause'

Oh I know about hardcore leveling warrior but I didn't really delve into it so anything beyond the first couple of chapters is unknown to me.

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*he was still learning and adapting to his reality.

shoved his pockets into his hands ?? my guy I'd suggest you reread your work before posting to avoid such obvious mistakes.

still don't get why you gave the mc Yopi as a name instead of going with the naming theme of the zoldic siblings.

so wait , does he meet said dragons and get their power through a fight or aknowledgement or does he just choose a dragon and try to subdue their power even they are long dead ? and in that case are we to expect oc dragons, og ones or a mix of both.

the gate my guy, Gil had a custom made key for someone to have access to the gate of Babylon or maybe Ea I don't know for sure.

okay soooo... if you're gonna keep doing this smut biz then I suggest you use the tag since I for one ain't interested in this type of work and I'm sure others are too.