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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim10h
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    Как он использует метод дыхания в утробе?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Another Fiery Revelation
    One Piece: Ace The Emperor of Flames
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    JackalVadim26d
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    Спасибо за главу!

    Ch 318 All-Out War (Part 3)
    Vongola Primo in One Piece
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    JackalVadim1mth
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    Russian

    Entertainment System
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1mth
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    Замечательное начало истории, с нетерпением жду продолжения. Хотя любопытно, будет ли любовная линия? В любом случае спасибо автору за труд.

    Entertainment System
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1mth
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    Очень интересная идея для истории. С нетерпением жду продолжения. Хочу увидеть как семья мафии занимает свое место в сверхъестественном мире. Спасибо автору за труд!

    White-Haired Template System
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim2mth
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    Sasuke? [img=faceslap]

    Ch 100 Assault on Konoha
    Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life
    Tranh châm biếm · Cadenadeaventuras
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim2mth
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    Хорошая глава, жду продолжения)

    Ch 197 Chapter 196
    Mangaka in the StrawHats
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim4mth
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    I like how the story develops. Usually when a main character becomes too powerful by age 3 (Jonin level or something) it's off-putting, but here it makes sense that he became a seal master at that age (and the desire, and the backstory, and the adult mind, everything leads to this). In other aspects of further development, the main thing is to try not to go too far. A kid who can beat up a kage seems funny. (But the choice of how to develop the story is yours, the author. I'm not asking you to change your story, that's just my opinion). Thanks for your hard work.

    NARUTO, Kushina's Brother
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim4mth
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    Спасибо за главу, жду продолжения) Думаю, что превратить часть армии в камень, не увидив даже части рыжих волос - это хороший способ деморализовать противника)

    Ch 28 Waking Up I
    NARUTO, Kushina's Brother
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim4mth
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    Спасибо за твой тяжёлый труд, автор! Замечательная история!

    Ch 209 Epilogue – FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH END.
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim5mth
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    Мне нравится история, жду выхода новых глав!) Хотя любопытно кто будет любовные интересом главного героя и будет ли он вообще? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

    ...,.,,,
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    JackalVadim5mth
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    I don't think taking hogyeku is a good idea. Yes, it will give him a ton of power and ability, but he already has an incredibly strong foundation. By the time of the battle, Yhwach will be strong enough to at least not lose. If there is a hogyoku, then just like any other bleach story, the character will become too powerful for their universe. This situation can lead to the fact that the main character will not fight with opponents, but will simply show how much stronger he is than everyone else until the end of the plot. But this is just my opinion, it’s up to you, author, how to develop the story)

    Ch 1 Byakuya Kuchiki
    The serene Swordsman
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    Ch 57 Announcement 2 -
    Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim7mth
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    Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.

    DXD: Revenge of the forgotten
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    JackalVadim7mth
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    Thank you for your work, it is a pleasure to read this work. Looking forward to the next chapters. Hello to the author. Not 5 full stars because I don't want it to seem like the review was written by a bot)

    Hades in the Multiverse
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    Thanks for the chapter. I don’t know why, but it’s funny for me to imagine how the heroes will scare each other with threats of going to the “Field of Punishment” in the kingdom of Hades.

    Ch 47 The river of souls
    Hades in the Multiverse
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    JackalVadim7mth
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    It is important to have a waifu for the main character) He seems a little lonely. I'm all for bleach.

    Ch 42 Help!
    Hades in the Multiverse
    Tranh châm biếm · Cedric_7512
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim7mth
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    Friend, write this story the way you see fit. Don't listen to the haters, I personally like everything. Chapters with construction, showdowns with the family and simple interactions between characters are a pleasure to read. It's nice to see that the main character is not just chasing power around the world, but is also engaged in other activities. I'm waiting for new chapters)

    Ch 42 Help!
    Hades in the Multiverse
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    JackalVadim1yr
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    [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

    Ch 115 Ancient Zoan
    Vongola Primo in One Piece
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    JackalVadim1yr
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    The story is very interesting and easy to read, I look forward to each chapter. Author, keep up the good work![img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins]

    Vongola Primo in One Piece
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