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honestly, I'm not feeling all that sympathetic to her
I might totally be mistaken but I don't think that the Essossi are using ravens
ching mentality
it's from the comics and it's really not a hyperbole
who hurt you? or did you hurt yourself in all of that edge?
it's a Russian fanfic from what I've seen of the way it's written, they always exaggerate in weird ways lol
older, dude, at least try to keep up with your own writing, the rest is good but there are a lot of these types of mistakes scattered in every chapter
yeah, ot would be stupid to think only 3 4 teams make it per year. Well, they do but those are only the privileged and most talented kids that make it into those classes and teams, rest probably go to the genin corps
as cliche as the rasengan is, you would have to be pretty dumb to not try and learn it. an A rank ninjutsu that you can do regardless of nature affinity and can further evolve in different ways? yeah it's dope
honestly? same, when you ignore your child who literally begs you to not go and just die you kinda deserve to die or be maimed. it's not like she has been constantly active training and raising her power, nope she was a mom that now is about to go on the battlefield and half arsing it
Choza
she just forgot that they were the target of kidnapping 7 and a half months ago? or didd the author just poof it from his memory?
nope, you ain't. It should be Whirlpool
genjutsu doesn't work like that.
canon is iffy on that, though the ino shika cho are likely a couple of years older, but nothing that author magic can't fix
that's like the whole range my chigga
much better than some other MCs whining about their last life and being emo over it, we get it, it's realistic but sucks to read. much better like this, old man had lived a life and now moved on
please, not another uplift story
it's so deep that it bypassed deep and went into pseudo psychological drivel