Grand_Go

bro just stop it.... so frustrating.

bro is doing ultra inception pro Max plus. 😂

so confusing bro

so many chapters just for a single flashback, just tell what happened bro, no need to add so many details and descriptions, it's confusing.

Mc's character just keeps changing, sometimes he becomes good and sometimes he becomes bad. There are no romantic subplots as to why some FLs developed feelings for him. They just love him. There are also some mistakes which I can understand that author is new writer but it feels a bit uncomfortable to read. But still a good novel.

This story has really good potential but I don't like the inconsistency in the character design of the mc. Later in the story it comes to the light that system was made by another mage which tries to control him which is really bad but it's okay. But what annoys me the most is that that man takes control of the system and watches everything through system while mc is having se* and advices mc to do 'this or that' while mc is having sex. It is really disgusting. MC is inconsistent about how to deal with women, there is no romance only se*.

MC is like a sheltered young lady and heroines are totally crazy. Author is right MC is totally stupid.

Author's Naming sense is absolutely godly 😑😑🥲

absolutely..... wonderful. just marvellous. The author is a genius.

🫥🫥🫥please, I am not here.😑😐🥲