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seli_1999

seli_1999

Lv11
2021-07-19 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • seli_1999
    seli_19993 years ago
    bình luận

    Thank you so much author....it's my 1st marvel fanfic and I truly loved it [img=update]please come back and grace us with ur marvelous marvel world🤩

  • seli_1999
    seli_19993 years ago
     công bố

    Hey author🙋‍♀️ur concept is gud and entertaining...hope it will be more fun in the future... suggestions: 1. please mention any author notes in any chapters using (A/N: blabla). 2. there are grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes. hope u will clear em. 3. check format of chapters before their release since dialogues of diff people are stacked up in same paragraph. It looks cluttered. my review is just upto 4 chapters so don't be discouraged with less stars... anyways all the best there👍

  • seli_1999
    seli_19993 years ago
     công bố

    One of my fav novels I'm following r8 now...story has grt scope and I hope authornim bestows us with more chapters...[img=update][img=recommend]