danial_kisim

chiyang maybe

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only read few chapter. bcs i have read too many villain route novel. i have slight aversion to protagnist route novel. where he go slap everyone face. classic protagnist novel. read on ur own pleasure.

why dont make it three type physique ball, soul energy ball, and mental strength ball. too many attribute too keep tap and it bcome resundant

oh one more the martial spirit is too strong. wtf. make it more standard. and level 20 innate soul strength is enough

the story quite good but the mc is too op. most soul land fanfic create too op mc like exagarated first spirit ring. the system is ok. not too much other novel influence.

already know this is fantasy world yet. dont bother to strengthen urself

delusional

too much info dump quite tiring too read

it should be written as power or energy