Adamo_Amet
In anime's realm and manga's artful page,Where music's notes do dance and sweetly sing,In reading's deep embrace, I find my stage,And in creative tales, my heart takes wing.
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Adamo_Amet44mintrả lời Talentless_Nanabtw, I am currently rewriting some of chapters with better Grammar and dialogue and a few plotpoints here and there so if you are confused by some stuff, just comment and I'll explain it okay. don't worry, majority of the plot is still the same, I am just fixing up the grammar, adding images and expanding on some minor characters via dialogue and some action
The city had a nostalgic feel, with simple, low buildings painted in calm, pastel colors. Streets were quieter than he expected, with only a few people and Pokémon milling about, giving the city a laid-back atmosphere that contrasted sharply with the bustling cities of the present day.- Adamo_Amet1dtrả lời sminly_04
The umbrella is filled with Fuinjutsu seal. Go back to chapter 68 when the umbrella was featured, i shared diagrams and showed off the numerous Fuinjutsu seals on it
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - Adamo_Amet1dtrả lời leonsama13024
Wow, so suddenly you can't trust my abilities as a writer to even give a new plot point a chance? Let me get this straight: everything was fine until I introduced the party system, which, by the way, I explained in Chapter 71 is designed to enrich the story with interesting plotlines, character developments, and so much more. This party system is a key to evolving the dynamics within the team. It’s meant to challenge Naruto’s solo tendencies and boost the development of characters like Hinata and Tenten. The story I’m weaving is one I believe in deeply and think will turn out awesome. I even put up a poll, remember? Where 68% of the readers supported this direction. So, it baffles me why you’d drop your faith in my storytelling so suddenly. You mentioned that the story was great until this system reveal—why is that? Is it because you’ve seen other authors handle this trope poorly? Haven't I delivered a compelling narrative up to this point? Where did all that goodwill go? Look, I understand the system reveal trope isn’t everyone’s favorite, but I have a solid plan for it. There's a lot I intend to explore and expand upon thanks to this new element. Why not trust my skills as a writer—a writer who has, until now, given you a story that you've enjoyed? If it's not your cup of tea anymore, that’s fine, but at least don't undermine the story with low reviews based on one change in a long series of successful chapters. Give it a chance, and let's see where this journey takes us together.
- Adamo_Amet2dbình luận
Lin Lingtian
Author's Note: This is Lin Lingtian. - Adamo_Amet2dtrả lời yuanyangzhenqi
Think of it like this: - Majority of the Conversation is between them as a buffer for anyone listening i.e Danzo. - Whenever Dragon mentions Iruka, Hiruzen knows that the next piece of Dialogue is a coded messages
"And maybe Naruto didn't? Maybe I didn't? Maybe Jiraiya didn't? But that's the responsibility that comes with that hat. Tobirama-sensei knew that you could bear it, I know you can bear it. So, Hiruzen, do you still have the strength to bear the responsibilities of that hat?" - Adamo_Amet2dtrả lời yuanyangzhenqi
Original Character
3- Mr. Higurashi is my OC, but I hope you all like how he stood up for Naruto, which made sense since Naruto worked for the guy for a week and even helped his daughter achieve her dream and paid back 50k worth of debt. - Adamo_Amet3dtrả lời yuanyangzhenqi
Fine
There was nothing inherently wrong with Gai of course, he was a good shinobi, a strong shinobi, a loyal friend, an honorable man, a great man even. However, he was flashy, visible, boisterous and extremely, extremely eccentric - - Adamo_Amet3dtrả lời yuanyangzhenqi
he didn't he just heard Asuma say that Kurenai is his girlfriend
"Thanks! Good luck with your girlfriend!" Naruto yelled as he dashed off, leaving a trail of bewilderment behind him. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Max Potion .
Nurse Joy smiled warmly at that and reached into her kit, pulling out a glass bottle with a spray cap filled with a shimmering blue potion. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Paper Bag Boy
Everyone turned to see a ten-year-old boy, his identity obscured by a paper bag over his head with two eyes cut out. He was carrying two fire extinguishers, which he placed on the floor with a heavy thud that echoed slightly in the suddenly silent room. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Ekans
Jessie, with a menacing scowl, threatened as she released her Ekans. The purple serpentine Pokémon hissed, its yellow eyes and underbelly stark against the smoke-filled room. The thick stripe around its neck and the rattle at the end of its tail highlighted its readiness to strike. Nurse Joy, cornered and visibly trembling, could barely muster a response. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Koffing
Koffing emerged in a burst of white light, quickly taking form as a spherical Pokémon filled with toxic gases. It hovered for a moment, its vacant eyes scanning the scene below and its wide mouth curling into a grin, revealing two pointed teeth. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Hot Air Ballokon
Jessie leaned over the wicker basket of their hot air balloon, her mahogany hair fluttering wildly in the breeze. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Meowth
James, with his shoulder-length periwinkle hair and a white long-sleeve shirt emblazoned with a large red R, adjusted the controls next to Meowth. The small feline Pokémon, its cream-colored fur highlighted with brown at the tips of its hind paws and tail, looked up with its wide eyes shining in anticipation. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
James
James, with his shoulder-length periwinkle hair and a white long-sleeve shirt emblazoned with a large red R, adjusted the controls next to Meowth. The small feline Pokémon, its cream-colored fur highlighted with brown at the tips of its hind paws and tail, looked up with its wide eyes shining in anticipation. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Jessie
Jessie leaned over the wicker basket of their hot air balloon, her mahogany hair fluttering wildly in the breeze. - Adamo_Amet3dtrả lời jaymark_cortez
returned back to her gym. i'll add a paragraph to clarify
Misty was trying to catch her breath as she hid, seeing way too many for her to try and take on alone. Staryu was the only Pokemon she had besides Goldeen and Oddish with Starmie somewhere else on this ship. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Officer Jenny
The voice belonged to a blue-haired woman in a police uniform—Officer Jenny. Austin's heart skipped a beat as he pieced together the timeline. - Adamo_Amet3dbình luận
Imagine this design to be on the pokedollars. - Arcane design - 10 and 100 pokedollars. - Articuno design - 500 Pokedollars. - Zapdos design - 500 - Moltres design - 500 - Mew design - 1000 pokedollars
The shopkeeper smoothly pulled out a few crisp notes, handing them to Austin. His eyes widened as he noticed the stylized mural of Mew on each bill—these were indeed Pokédollars, but unlike any currency he had ever seen before.