Zavia_6318

even though its a little cring i love it but pls stop being overly concerned like feeling heart ach for someones pain its too much my brother cant even look at and i wanted to introduce him to reading novels

cultivating

he was truly in the world of cultivators

mc moans like a girl too

since when do guys moan the mc is naive stupid and cheater too. I have no problem with him cheating, but he should have a reason to cheat and not shouldn't be easily found out

the name needs some works

dude don't sell your clothes

yo author, your novel moved me to tears and made me experience love again. I can not put my feelings into words how great your novel is

just mentioned her state of mind and her face or the position her body is in mention her legs closed up and her breast poking out her dress

Author, every time you get back to the girls, you describe her figure. It's annoying that too repetitive