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why are you making little ninja academy so complicated. How would people other than ninja kids answer this? it would have been fine to just check if chakra is enough and untalented kids will get filtered out as school years go by. Without author handwaving this is an impossible test for children who have no formal training
You shouldn't make childhood arc things too complicated like here otherwise you will suffer the the same fate as 90 percent of Naruto fics which is dropped before chunnin exam
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what is this op not op mc.
man you should do these npc commentry less. it is just odd
why do you give protagonist so much advantages at start. there is no effort at all.
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