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AcedrgnIV

AcedrgnIV

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2021-07-07 đã tham giaGlobal
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    AcedrgnIV1d
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    No but because they are children

    Ch 37 Got a Slave...?
    I Became a Scum in Depressing Game
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    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: The Entire Village Mobilizes - Danzo, You've Made a Big Mistake!
    Reviving the Uchiha Clan: Starting with a Legacy of Many Descendants
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    Man I don't think this fic will reach even chunnin exam arc like I thought with this AU setting. There is very little chance that it will pass this ninja academy arc.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: Entertainment
    Naruto: Kurogami, The Gamer Shinobi
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    why are you making little ninja academy so complicated. How would people other than ninja kids answer this? it would have been fine to just check if chakra is enough and untalented kids will get filtered out as school years go by. Without author handwaving this is an impossible test for children who have no formal training

    Kurogami looked at the first question and... 'Seriously...? If a ninja has 8 kunai and throws 3, how many does he have left?... He obviously has 4!' He joked sarcastically, laughing at how easy the questions were, forgetting the fact that the test was for him and all other 6 year olds in the room currently.
    Naruto: Kurogami, The Gamer Shinobi
    Tranh châm biếm · Casual7
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    You shouldn't make childhood arc things too complicated like here otherwise you will suffer the the same fate as 90 percent of Naruto fics which is dropped before chunnin exam

    Any questions/suggestions? 
    Naruto: Kurogami, The Gamer Shinobi
    Tranh châm biếm · Casual7
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    Why is he yapping so much

    Ch 23 Escape of Naboo(1)
    Star Wars: Senator
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    [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
    One Piece: Biggest Scum in Marine History
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    Man it just feels live every other hinese novel. So dissappointing

    Ch 51 Purchase Successful!
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Kỳ huyễn · WinterDragon_1
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    AcedrgnIV19d
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    Great

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    AcedrgnIV19d
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    what is this op not op mc.

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    man you should do these npc commentry less. it is just odd

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    why do you give protagonist so much advantages at start. there is no effort at all.

    [Ding! Host, The white snake you have as this body's spirit is no ordinary one-star spirit! It is the 9-headed devouring Dragon spirit which is of the highest grade!]
    Villain : I reincarnated as a Prince! Shouldn't I have a Harem?
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    It is good read until now Sjjsjsjsjekwo2o8283844uhfnxnakq92983urydhxhi38384859goodosjqh2u28eixjnxbxbxi4i38839291isjxjjd48njdjdxjjzkkaka s s e w w wbjwifij j ufuxu u ju i i i i i i ujrrb e f tbtbtb u u u. Y 4 3 e 4 4. 6 u u v x. W. 3 t f c. S w 2 4. T g x. S w 2 1. 3 4 4. 4 t y g v. X s a w t g. H h h h h h f d s. S x d r e. D

    Trouble with older women in the anime-world (and why it is worth it)
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    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Artificial Lake
    Pokemon: I'm a Farmer
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    I like the direction you are taking this story

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: A Bountiful Harvest
    Pokemon: I'm a Farmer
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    as***** grandparents.

    Shito's parents, Sazama and Kumiko, compare Shuichi to Shinro, now a billionaire. This dissatisfaction is palpable to Shito and his wife.
    Tycoon of Video Games
    Diễn sinh trò chơi · NewComer714
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    A little too angsty but writing is good.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Living as a Bastard.
    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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    what is this good and bad yakuza thing is even about where seemingly everyone is like you can't discriminate against them, this is ----ist ?? And why are mega corporation even afraid of them?

    Ch 35 Asahi's reminder
    Tycoon of Video Games
    Diễn sinh trò chơi · NewComer714
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    cool

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 : Food is money
    Naruto: Shinobi SI
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    Why are you even making tests so complicated. Now you will have to make another tests for jounin. This will just drag things. You can skip some things otherwose this will be one of the many things that dont go past chunin arc

    Ch 27 Graduation exams! Part-2
    The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi
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