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Give me more specifics, because honestly I pretty much lost my zeal for this story as well. It felt like I went too far off course on my original idea, so tell me how you really feel, specifically and it might help me clarify my own thoughts.
Been waiting on it. Also, develop your characters at their own pace. If it's not enjoyable for you, you'll probably drop and I want to see where this goes. So, keep writing.
Keep it coming. It's clearly an AU, and his meeting them/integrating with them makes very little sense (he just appeared), but that's okay. I'm looking forward to how you progress with the story.
Shut up, Arex.
Maybe Tony Jaa style Muay Tai?
They're all women. Why a harem instead of polyamory? With that you could have multiple relationships all in a single relationship. Gwen can date two girls, three girls, four girls, who are all dating each other. Harems always appear convoluted and nonsensical mostly because it involves a bunch of people vying for the attention of one individual.
Ging approves.
Second Hokage
Compared to the grey goop they showed on the show in the ark. Bear meat is the shit.
Do it.