London_Ellis

A good start to this story turned into recycled material and a clear word count push for probably the sake to try and have the story picked up as a contract. if that's your only goal then I hope you get it but there's a lot better ways to get more views and have a successful novel. best of luck going forward, hope you improve on story advancement and much better character development

spot on. had good potential in the beginning but turned into another frustrating story where the author doesn't put any effort to move the story forward. it appears as a numbers game for author just trying to push out as many words as possible even those it's recycled situations from earlier chapters presented in different ways. hope the author changes his motivation for this story otherwise it'll flop and never blow up in a good way

I'm only at the "Token" chapters but gotta say for a first novel from you it's awesome so far [img=recommend]

seems way more logical to think he hid strength of a higher level and jumping to something uncommon

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imagining this definitely had me laughing

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lol I'm pretty sure he's cycling his origin energy to keep his youthful appearance by now cause yea it's been saying 25 for a while now haha

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Great chapter, had me hooked pretty good. dont Understand how the Main body can still be in touch with the halfstep great sage though. if the sea of ruination eats away at even his soul to make it a sliver then any connection should be cut off in the sea too. like with noahs clones They arent seperated by cosmic essence but his second body is seperated from the primordial cosmos by ruination. (No hate, i still find it interEsting, just wonder how it works) whats the thought behind this was aside from plot development .