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poopyscoopy1231yrbình luậnBeside her was a small child that looked around my age. She had short white hair and black eyes.- poopyscoopy1231yrbình luậnĐoạn này đã bị xóa
- poopyscoopy1231yrbình luậnAfter going into the front yard I saw my instructor. She had long white hair tied up into a ponytail like my dad. She had a black tattoo that looked like a lightning bolt and was smoking a cigar. When looking into her cold black eyes It felt like she was staring directly into my soul.
- poopyscoopy1231yrbình luậnRight next to her was a man around the same age as her. He had his white hair tied back and was smoking a cigar. His eyes seemed to be transparent.
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- poopyscoopy1232yrtrả lời Kalawang
I just changed it, look again.
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Ok, I'll change it to around the academy which would seem more reasonable.
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Sorry. But when I said that the plot was 4 years before the original plot I thought that meant that the MC was 4 years older than naruto. And in the synopsis, I said that this naruto might have a slightly different timeline than the original. Sorry again.
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+1
A - "Yes," Shinji planned to join and get the rank of Chunin as soon as possible. He will train moderately hard during these two weeks as he plans to spend some time with his teammates to make sure they're all for the Chunin Exams.