I Like the story and all for rightnow aka the first chapter but we really dont know what the main character looks like and the only thing we know is that bean is cute asf and giant monster what does the main character look like i wanna know and it fits to much in one chapter like its moving to fast my reccomendations is try to make everything more clear and sensiable overall better than these power fantasy

Amazing i love it god tier righting amazing grammar and i love the realism to the story i recommend this to anyone who loves fantasy read it right now so good

very pog I worked my hardest on. this one very nice I hope everyone else enjoys it I am making the story as I go so there might be some plot holes