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DaoistJJepUa

DaoistJJepUa

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2021-06-14 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • DaoistJJepUa
    DaoistJJepUa2yr
     công bố

    I think it's interesting story which merits more views. In fact there is only one bad point : too much description. The universe is well developed, but it lacks in term of precision (sorry for my english, it's not a language that i speak).

    To Conquer Love
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  • DaoistJJepUa
    DaoistJJepUa2yr
    bình luận

    Yes and he will drug u when u don't see him

    The bartender throws his head back in laughter before saying "I've got you beautiful. Don't worry, I'll make you something good." I give him a large smile and say "Thanks, I owe you one." As he starts making my drink, I look around the bar to see that Thane had already gotten in.
    The Secret Switch
    Kỳ huyễn · Blissfullrage
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  • DaoistJJepUa
    DaoistJJepUa2yr
    trả lời Lyaiya

    YEAH

    "Why are you acting like this again?" I asked as Cabel put my hand on his face, caressing his sculptured face with it. 
    I Don’t Want This Bad Ending
    Kỳ huyễn · MyCatPaws
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  • DaoistJJepUa
    DaoistJJepUa2yr
    bình luận

    I like this story :)

    'What the hell is wrong with this dude? Why is he angry?' I thought as Cabel walked up to the bed and pushed Gab aside.
    I Don’t Want This Bad Ending
    Kỳ huyễn · MyCatPaws
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  • DaoistJJepUa
    DaoistJJepUa2yr
     công bố

    Really interesting :) I love the way, the heroine is describe and all the protagonist. I think the touch of mystery add something within the story.

    I Don’t Want This Bad Ending
    Kỳ huyễn · MyCatPaws
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