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finally a breakaway isseikai where the MC and the world in general does not have any overpowered magical powers. it's just a bare bones rags to riches story. where one has to use one's ingenuity to overcome all obstacles of a medieval europe. in a land oppressed by religion and corruption, it's a true bitter fight to the top and to stay on top.
The pacing of the plot and the way it pulls you in and make you want more is fabulous. My biggest gripe about it has got to be a confusing if not inconsistent time-line sometimes, like 6 months of scathach training, and 18 months of Victor locked in the human world equals atlest 2 years so he should be 23 but the the loop back and say 22 always and only a year in the human world. The analogies and mannerism are decent but inconsistent and sometimes incoherent. spelling mistakes happen, and the POV of charectors can be inconsistent. like "X" is in both groups when they split up. and the way some can use others powers I vague with no explanation despite being unique. like the maids in Victor's shadow without kaguya sometimes. also haw the depictions of Victor are a copyright mirror of alucard and his power in hellsing. feels a bit clichéd. dark form many eyes and teeth, dog beast morph hand, including the physical description used a lot. and using the word "pretty" in improper ways like "pretty sure" a word to describe appearance is incoherently used.
the problem arises more from rates of cultural evolution more that lack of similar interpretation. the Chinese poetics gives such a uniform resemblance to a Renaissance period of English literature, almost of a shakesperian variety. but towards a modern culture progression and pacing for development is far too fast for such depth. it's not that it's lost on us, it just feels slow and constraining. lord grim? vow of silence may have been a better translation. as it still gives inference to the commemoration we hold of ww1 Flanders fields poem.