Yonko_master
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Yes, it is, as the new author I will explain the outside world better, and how status really affects the society in this novel
I did realize it as well... I am the new author of the book, and after reading it, I must say that there is not much detail on the side characters and he was focusing on too many characters at a time. Plus, in the last few chapters, he did a few questionable moves concerning the side characters. However, he already told me about his plans, and I plan on executing them, but I still will create a new era for the story without modifying what he has already done.
Don'tt make it weird ok, it's just a mistake
Mistake
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I remember reading this story 3 to 4 weeks ago and being very disappointed with the dialogue and the grammar errors. To be honest, during that time I would have given your story 2 stars, however, you have improved your novel putting quotation marks, and improving the grammar. Of course, there are still a few grammatical errors that can be seen, however, I still do understand the essence of what you meant! I do encourage you to make the chapters a bit longer. I do see a lot of improvement in your work, congrats!
Of course, when it comes to the introduction of the story such as giving a brief explanation of the world and the novel, you can also put big paragraphs, it doesn't harm the beauty of the novel
I love the different names you give to your characters!