Made changes to mtl. Give it a try again

I understand that. However, I have improved the readability if you do want to give it a try again

Edited again. 100x better now. Check it out

It should be there in one of the other reviews

Give it a try again. You will be surprised

yes

Powerful Female Lead with a backstory full of tragedy. Although some things doesn't make that much sense, this story has a good potential if written well

The adventures of Manasi and Spirit System are quite fun to read. Especially, their conversations are top tier. Keep up the good work!......

I haven't read the original book Lost in Time; Unforgiven so it was somewhat hard for me to understand the relevance of events. However, the writing is really good and author explain many of the stuff.

The concept is interesting. The thing about going against fate is what attracts me a bit. The female lead is a bit naive but it is fun for a normal read.

Thanks for the kind review. Although I would suggest you to read the original first. It's one of the most unique novels out there

I wouldn't suggest.

For those who prefer Female lead with a strong personality, you will most likely love this book. Also, the start is really good and funny. Recommend reading it.

Haha this is amazing

sorry it's not

I need MOAR!!

I just uploaded the 2nd part

no I understand. I am also referring to multiple sources while translating to get the most accurate translation.

Haha thanks

It's really nice to hear from someone who hasn't read the original but provide such detailed insights. However, I would suggest you to read the original novel first. It's a gem and you will definitely love it. I wouldn't want you to miss out on that.