Welp too bad, anyway thank you for your in put, if you'd like to tell where I contradicted myself I'd greatly appreciate it, besides that enjoy your day.

Yo these look amazing, is it alright if I use them?

Fair point.

Oh ya, also I forgot, the fruit reincarnation thing, ya a lot of people like to debate that point. Listen here, do you have evidence that proves against it? No, apart from your inferences, while there is literal showings in the manga and anime of fruit reincarnation taking place relatively close. Also how do you think the Marines have so many devil fruit users? How can Blackbeard hunt devil fruits? Does he have some science mumbo jumbo? If so why didn't Caesar who's a relatively smart man use it too instead of just placing some apples in a cart? Maybe because, the fruits actually reincarnate into the closest fruit of the same type? I don't know just some speculation. Sure I may be wrong and you may be completely right, but with the current information in my opinion, and this is my fanfic they reincarnate into the closest fruit of the same type.

Okay you can argue that my execution and plot development was bad or not to your liking I won't argue with that, but a few things. Firstly you still haven't clarified how my grammar and or overall writing quality is bad at least compared to other fanfictions. The Hancock bit ya you can call it unoriginal but I find plot devicing in whatever an "old mysterious" ossan is is just not my thing frankly, naturally a One Piece fanfiction is going to have One Piece characters. Apart from that, apart from what? Hancock, and Shimotsuki Village my characters have legit not encountered anyone of real plot importance by accident. Your Mera Mera point is invalid since Sixis island did actually have the fruit there its a literal fact, in fact I am surprised you aren't praising my original treasure I placed there since you seem to have wanted more original things. Overall my point being, you can have your opinion and your review, but some of your inferences are simply, wrong or contradictory. Aka, as far as I know Lawless doesn't exist in One Piece therefore original, Tigria is my original creation and all the villains so far bar from Hancock have been my own creations, therefore I am surprised your review is saying mine follows One Piece too much considering I haven't been using much characters from One Piece besides here and there. I'll give you that maybe my execution isn't the greatest and its extremely slow, or the fruit choosing thing is a bit stupid sure, but please be a bit more clear when making a review and searching up the actual facts in some instances.

Lets go first comment.

I shall claim 2nd comment of this masterpiece.

I pronounce it Ark but if you prefer Arch you can pronounce at as such, it doesn't really matter at the end of the day.

Ya I've lost a bit of direction to be honest, there isn't really anyone I can put as an opponent without absolutely wrecking Arch, or having Arch absolutely wrecking them and with the timeline as it is its a bit tough, I think I might start adding more original things, such as characters opposing factions to make things more exciting, thank you for your input.

Ngl I didn't even think of the voice of all things when making up the fruit, but you're right they do seem to share a lot of similarities.

Fair enough I guess, although you did get a few points incorrect, yes people don't like that Hancock thing that much its a regular complaint so in that sense thanks for this review cause people can see it and not complain about it when they finally reach that chapter. On the other hand the Kingdom building comes a bit later and frankly speaking the adventuring at least in my opinion made sense but of course its a matter of opinion. The age difference between the Mc and Hancock is 3 years, and I am gonna be real, I don't know where you got "simping" from. Also you lot put wayyyy too much importance on the devil fruit secret sure its valuable but its clear as day that those at the top of the world all know about it considering Caesar knew about it, meaning Doflamingo probably knew about it, meaning by extension Kaido probably knew about it, meaning that in general its a valuable piece of information but not as secret as y'all believe. Now onto another point, giving it to Hancock, sure you can disagree but Arch didn't have anything to give at the time and frankly speaking that piece of information doesn't put Arch is a disadvantageous position. What's she gonna do, kill the devil fruit users of Tigria? Hancock firstly just turns people to stone she finds on the calm belt to steal their supplies and apart from that Arch is just as strong as her, besides that Hancock herself would probably not give the Kuja devil fruits because of her circumstances so again as I've said multiple times in her eyes they're probably not as valuable. Now ya you could argue why didn't Hancock betray Arch but I take creative liberties with that, over all though I hope I got my point across, its too bad you didn't enjoy the novel and good luck finding one you do.

As of now no, I'll be trying to introduce a few more female characters later on.

Heh, funny joke.

They are though? At least that's the general minimum price.

Well at the paragraph at which you're commenting they're allied maybe I should clarify more.

Well that's a matter of opinion and frankly is just the choice made, also seeds are cheaper and easier to transport but anyway.

Clarify, do you mean letting him into the island? If so ya I took some liberties with that point, if you mean everything else then I think it was accurate to an extent maybe not perfectly so but its the best I could manage.

Thank you for your input.

Thanks for all the corrections.

What does my mum have to do with this conversation? What am I meant to reply with, your mum gae? Or your dad? I am genuinely confused.