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Hey y’all I’m a new writer. I love reading stories and coming up with my own as well. Lately I’ve been working a lot so my writing progress might not be very fast.
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Man no one guessed ruler???
The order of the colors makes me so uncomfy. So much more satisfying if it’s white, blue, green, red, then black.
I can see the author really loves rainbows and rainbow colored things. I wholeheartedly agree!!
And convulsing
Ummm no earth should combat wind and fire should combat earth because wind fuels fire and fire can melt earth water puts out fire
How is his strength so low after all the eggs he’s eaten plus the phoenix egg that gave him 1000 alone
How many times have they called it a hen obviously it’s female it’s a hen not a rooster
Whattt he had 11 then got 7 in the forest and then for the quest then for making it through the first day it should be more around 22
What happen to his 100 point shield. He should’ve only received 10 damage
Didn’t he just lose that talent
Right that’s what I was thinking
He literally never got bitten only hit by tail, soooooo where the poison come from 🧐😒😤
Too much missing I formation. Things keep changing without letting the audience know
I jumped over 200 without us even realizing it. It was definitely never mentioned
If he grows too fast he would lose control in his ability he’s taking the step by step approach. “Those who are quick to run are quick to fall”- W. Shakesphere
Didn’t he open the shop by having a thousand of a single item so that should be at least 1000
Right with so many wolves how did he not get any special rewards like usual
lol if he triples his speed it’s 369
It’s not fantasy
20 hectares is actually about 40 acres