Amalesh_sarkar

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you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise, it's a good story, especially for your main character, in your tag you do not put an action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up. just you know lots of isekai wn release so if you want to stand out you need to make more intresting.