Conic Section Gang: Elliptical Division
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I wish my flame pillar got bigger every day...
Neto doesn't have a sister. Peter wants to see his sister grow up, but he has terminal cancer, so this will be impossible without the help of SUN.
Thank you man, I rewrote chapter 31 and 32 to improve the story. I took a break for a bit but im back in action, so expect more chapters coming up! <3
Thank you for the continued support! As a new author I really appreciate it <3 I hope you're enjoying where the story goes, and if you have any constructive criticism, let me know. PS: I usually edit chapters one day after writing them, so if you see a chapter posted right away, and the quality is sub-par, please check back for the re-release. The only reason I post unedited chapters is to make sure my novel can utilize WN algorithm.
Thanks for the encouragement! <3
FYI: If you're reading on mobile, the edits might not show for a bit unfortunately.
Hey man, I completely reworked chapter 9 based on your advice and did my best to patch up all the plot holes you mentioned. Thanks again for the feedback! I hope you'll keep reading <3
Thanks for the awesome feedback! Rewrite coming soon <3