A girl with big dreams and no income.
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what is the age of consent in Hollywood?
one who has seen stars fall to drugs
I just binge read the entire story in 2 days. i find it a bit unbelievable that Lucas hasn't met his PR, and other supporting teams ever. This adds a bit of unrealism. His relationship with Jennifer is stagnant, he could have invited her to his brother's wedding as a SO. Lack of new or original intricate regular characters in the past 100 or so chapters in a superstar's journey feels unrealistic. Repeated Airports scenes, mundane scenes that add no growth just work as filler makes it boring at times where you're just going through motions, Lucas's Past isn't clear, where did he leave the current world and when can we expect uncertainty, his knowledge feels random, Extreme Rise of social media and Fast communication to that level feels too soon with expensive data and lacking phones in early 2010s. A lot of things relied on the contribution of a lot of people but Lucas single handedly doing everything feels unrealistic, Not the vibe i guess you're going for. Just my 2 cents, I did like this fic a lot and of course I'll continue reading this.
Just born OC is already horny for his mother, aunt and grandmother.
I don't even understand what's going on in this story. Grammar is just so bad.
I need more. I NEED MORE OF THIS, MY 2 FAVORITE FANDOMS COLLIDING LIKE THIS . ARRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH
nooooooo what a cliffhanger
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS
is the character bipolar? The tone of his inner monologue changes every chapter.