NobeliumBanshee
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WHY SLAY ONE MEMBER OF A FAMILY WHEN YOU CAN SLAY TWO? THE CLOTHIER LYDIA HAS UNCOVERED THE MERCHANT OF HER HUSBAND. SLAY HER BEFORE SHE ALERTS THE GUARDS.- NobeliumBanshee5dbình luận
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Chapter 50. You Have Two Choices. - NobeliumBanshee7dbình luận
are you going to drop the next chapter anytime soon or did u give up on this
Ready or not, It was time for round 2 against a certain shadow. - NobeliumBanshee7dbình luậnCh 12 Liandor's suffering
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i feel like he should kill zark and then monologue since it's better to kill first and talk after
"Please let me go. I can swear in front of Heaven and Earth to forget everything and never tell anyone. I can even move to another city. Please..." Zark fell to his knees, begging Rand, but Rand ignored his pleas. - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
are you the plagiarist?
"You'd better shut up now, Leylin. You've already said too much. Senior Oberin is the elder's only disciple and has a great future ahead of him, unlike scum like you. If you don't want me to confiscate all your spirit stones for the next month for your insolence, disappear right now. - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
ONE PIECE!!! THE ONE PIECE IS REAL. Can we get much higher, so high
"It's nothing, you don't need to bow for such a small thing. Actually, you surprised me a bit, young Oberin. Almost everyone asks me something: from foolish questions like 'which technique is the strongest' to where to find the technique their master recommended. But you didn't ask anything. Instead, you chose to find a technique suitable for your needs on your own, without relying on others. That's the mindset of a true cultivator, and it's something I value in novices and disciples. That's why I gave you one piece of advice and now I'll give you another. Your choice of technique is quite good; its versatility in use will give you a significant advantage over opponents. But don't try to start practicing it too early, at least not before reaching the fourth level of Qi Condensation. Yes, it's written that it can be practiced from the third level, but trust me, you'll save a lot of time if you wait. Besides, with your talent, you won't have to wait long." - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
first character in fiction to deduce and counteract the system
Knowing all this, the question arises: what should I do? Should I give up trying to eliminate him and keep my distance, hoping our paths never cross? No, no, relying on fate is not the way of the strong, and certainly not the way of a future immortal. I don't believe this monster is invincible; otherwise, it wouldn't have reacted to my intent. This means it is vulnerable, at least partially. So the plan remains the same: Weed, whoever or whatever he is, needs to be eliminated. The sooner, the better. But I must not attempt this head-on; I fear I wouldn't survive a counterattack from the entity behind Weed. Ideally, this should be done through another's hands, and if it fails, I must understand why and adjust my strategy accordingly. I need to find a suitable pawn for this task. If Weed is eliminated on the first attempt and only the pawn is lost, that would be the perfect outcome." - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
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Rand, meanwhile, gently rubbed the spot where Cairus's fist had landed and casually remarked, "Could you hit me a few more times, please? I can't quite tell if I felt anything or not." - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
really? bran stark
"Bran Stark wins, he takes first place in his group." - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
split up your dialogue and paragraphs. it feels like the characters are ranting not talking to one another. also it reads easier if you split them up
"Enough, everyone stop. We'll finish with the 'theory' for today, and move on to the most important part, practice. Knowing the katas and being able to perform them is extremely important, but if you can't use them in real combat, then such knowledge is useless and the skill is meaningless. So now we'll learn to fight for real. Yes, you understood correctly, we'll have training fights now. You don't have to hold back, but try not to maim your opponent unnecessarily. If I notice anyone slacking off or fighting at half strength, they'll train with me personally. And now, pair up as you choose. You have thirty seconds for that. Oberin, Lucius, except for you two. You've reached the first stage, but you still don't fully control your strength, so you're not allowed to practice with ordinary people yet. So you will be a separate couple. And Eyron, you also don't fully control your body, so you'll pair up with me. - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
rand is talking as we know by the quotation marks but then he switches to third person and then back to first. either end the quotation mark or change he to I
"Now it's clear why Byron left bronze ingots in my ring. This should be enough to achieve the first level. But later, I'll have to buy significantly more, and it would also be good to find somewhere in large quantities some healing pills. But right now, I need to choose between two possible courses of action. The first is to devote all my time to meditation and try to reach the second level of Qi Condensation before the competitions begin. The second is to spend all my energy on training the Bronze Body technique and try to achieve the first level in it. The problem with the first option is that the increase in Qi quantity from reaching the second stage won't give much. Yes, along with the increase in energy quantity, other indicators such as strength, speed, endurance, and others will slightly increase. But that's it; it won't be possible to truly use this increased Qi energy because he 'doesn't know' any techniques that can use it. And therefore, ultimately, the increase in combat potential will still be quite limited. At the same time, trying to increase cultivation is always the right thing to do. And achieving the first level in the Bronze Body will allow him to be almost invulnerable to those who have just entered the Qi Condensation stage and still don't know any techniques. And it's better to start moving towards the fourth level of the technique as soon as possible. - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
mc needs to control his emotions better, it's detrimental to his path to immorality
After these last words, Rand's face hardened, and he tried not to listen further to anyone's conversations because he was afraid he might lose control and attack them all. - NobeliumBanshee8dbình luận
suggestion: whom luck would shine upon today -> upon whom luck would shine on today
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - NobeliumBanshee9dbình luận
mc is cooking
The elder did not finish his sentence, but his meaning was clear. Is Elias Ray's secret child? - NobeliumBanshee10dbình luận
Bai Ning bing fan fic?
Yet, the world is fair in its own way, as they were cursed, and none could live long. Their bodies could not tolerate such pure energy. Although they could use an unlimited amount of aether, their aether was too pure, and the energy inside their aperture would slowly kill them from within. - NobeliumBanshee10dbình luận
are you yoinking reverend Insanity's cultivation system?
'With this one, I should be able to awaken my aperture.' - NobeliumBanshee10dtrả lời BLACKQEAZER
even though you might have memories of your previous life, it doesn't mean that you have the processing power to think since he was literally being born
The man soon realized that he was not in his body but instead one of a newborn that was currently experiencing its first breaths.