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F**king h*ll. What are you even thinking? My head hurts. First you did not exact even an ounce of revenge for them using you then ousting you like you are nothing, even after that you still help them get past the gates of kings landing but what did you get? nothing but a letter stating you as a traitor. Adding to that, you give one of the dragons of the mc to someone else... And lastly an even more frustrating thing, why? What's the need of having ashara birth a child? More so of rhaegar the stupidest character in the series.

It's good, compared to other fics in this site. What i don't like about it is, genryusai's power is being nerf, underestimated or whatever the author want it to be. Genryusai defeated two of the most powerful captain, three sternriter(with power above that of captain) and even the quincy emperor. So what up with this? 60% should be enough to decimate konoha and burn mito into ashes.

Mah boi ming's talent got nerf so bad together with zi yan's strength. Last chapter it is stated that she or zi yan's body is comparable to rank 6 beast or dou huang(emperor) in cultivation that ape is rank 5 or dou wang(king)

Now I'm wondering who's more talented

Doesn't ming have better talent than yan?? Then why is his cultivation so slow. Yan started cultivating at 4 but lost it until he's 15, then from 15 to 21 he goes from thrash to peak dou king in just six years. Ming started cultivating from when he is just 4 until now, he's already 15 right?? Counting the years ming takes 11 years to reach dou king and he's not even at the peak

Do you even know what is a peerage???..... No matter where he go in that world the "supernatural" beings will see him as a servant or a slave of the king. Mind you in a peerage there is a ranking from king to pawn the fcking king which is rias can order him to do her bidding if that is not a servant i dont know what is

Funny how the author of the fic keep making excuses in the comment section to justify the 'common sense'??(does the mc even have this?) And the idiotic doings of the mc. The heroines of the fic want to throw themselves to mc the moment they saw him like horny dogs in heat.

150+ chapter in still being the goody 2 shoes he is, he never have the motivation nor the enthusiasm and will to get stronger all he do all day is flirt and being a nanny for all of them. He keeps on letting his enemy go then one time he buried the enemy of his wives that hurt and almost kill stella if they didn't get there fast. It irks me that even remia knows what he should be doing, and that is leveling up and powered his wives or friends after, but he did nothing of that. he should have left the majority of players in the dust but no, he is the one getting left up(the irony is he have legendary class, i bet the majority of players don't even have unique class.)

How many chapters did i get through? I dont remember clearly. Expecting op character from the get go? No I'm not, but, i atleast expect him to have enough power and not a bottom feeder runt. Expecting fantasy from the get go? Is being reborn as a dragon not enough of a fantasy for you?. The problem with your novel is that you the author write a pathetic 'DRAGON' RIGHT FROM THE START, it's okay if he is not that powerful right away because hes a fuc*king baby that's common sense, but what did we get? A 'dragon' so weak that can't even stand or walk properly? A dragon so weak that can't even get power through common means of a dragon just like what his father said? Mind you he got a system, to top it all he even got the legacy, sin of gluttony, in addition to that hes a fck*ing 30 year old man reborn but can't think properly what do you expect the readers to understand? Don't tell me you expect them to jump in joy and read your novel with enthusiasm when you portray a mighty species describe as top of the pyramid in every fantasy, novels, and myths as a pathetic shi*t that can't even walk properly

A dragon that is so pathetically weak and always seek comfort in his inner monologue's despite having a system and a legacy which is both thrash in my opinion