NTR_Specialist

Haha.... Ha... Well? What do you think. I can let you judge if mc want someone or if mc would want someone. But to answer your question. No, mc don't have any.

Thank you for the review, as a person who just write novels to kill time, it is hard to stay commited to it, grammar mistakes happens because i want to finish a chapter fast as i can before procrastination hits and didn't recheck some of the errors. And as for the title, you're right, i also has the same experience. Love interest? Is this a question?

Sadly, this is what we are experiencing in today's society. For example, twitter. That's the place where words lost it's value and everyone forgot it's meaning, throwed to everyone like a piece of wet paper but can affect someone like stigmata.

to be honest, i have a quite experience of dealing with pseudo intellectuals, both in internet and real life. Grammar and vocabulary matters than giving the word a weight or worth. We live in a society....

I didn't lie, see? Wholesome

It's in the first paragraph

A black face mask.

Thank you for the feedback, i am experimenting about faster dialogues and transition of first and third person narration to test my skills. Can you put your suggestion here? I will consider it, this kind of construction might stay for a while so please, while i'm still testing it, memorize the attitude of the characters.