Honestly not a bad story for something that I found a while ago. The original story is “Auto Hunting With My Clones” Which is on WEBTOON. Lacks the depth and is missing a lot of content to make it as good. Once you update this story I’d expect better quality content it feels just kind of rushed and cheap compared to what you could have done.

Story would have potential if there was flavor content added. That being said the story doesn’t have the best character development.

Honestly feel like a third grader wrote this. I don’t even want to give this one star cause over half the stories plot is the word they. Please go back to school and learn how you failed reading and writing. It would be a favor for you and your readers.

I’m not going to lie at first I didn’t know what to expect and was pleasantly surprised when I found that someone else on this app uses pixel dungeon. I’m also going to go out on a limb and guess you prefer rogue just like me. That being said good story if you’ re willing to stick with it. Definitely a unique combination to say the least.